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Is your country a safe country? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
Yes.
>> Yes it is.
My country is the very safe place in the world.
>> My country is a very safe place in the world.
First, our country cancel to possession of arms.
>> Firstly, our country does not allow the possession of guns.
So,it is a safe from the guns.
>> So, it is a gun free country.
Second, our country is good at public safety.
>> Secondly, our country focuses on public safety.
So,there are lots of policeman.
>> So, there are lots of policemen.
Last, many foreigner thinks that our country is dangerous because North Korea.
>> Lastly, many foreigners think that our country is dangerous because of North Korea.
But it is not a real.
>> But that is not real.
Korea is very safe place so we will unification each other someday.
>> Korea is a very safe place to live in and our country will be reunited with North Korea someday.
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