homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Composition:
Describe something you could never give away.
I will never give my people away. Because it's very hard to get someone's mind. So if I got familiar with someone than I would keep trying to be a friend. And I don't betray my friends ever. So, I got many friends and we can help each other.
Hi, Teacher Gracelyn.
This one is so hard to answer. But I tried my best. If you got an idea about this, let me know something please.
Thanks.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Jake! Thank you very much for trying you best in answering the question. I really appreciate it.
To give you an idea, it could be a present or anything that is valuable to you. We will talk about it in our class.
Anyway, please take note of the corrections.
T. Gracelyn
I will never give my people away.
>>I will never give my loved ones away.
Because it\'s very hard to get someone\'s mind.
>>Because it is very difficult to get someone\'s trust.
So if I got familiar with someone than I would keep trying to be a friend.
>>So if I meet someone who is special, I try to be friends with him/her.
And I don\'t betray my friends ever.
>>And I don\'t betray my friends.
>>And I will never betray my friends.
So, I got many friends and we can help each other.
>>correct
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