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2018-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Describe a place you will never forget. Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. I can't forget in Boracay expreience. Especially, I can't forget when I see under the see by scuba diving. It was an one of the wonderful place what I see many natural view. So,I want to go there again because I want to save my scuba diving's memory.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I am really glad that you enjoyed your vacation in Boracay. I hope that you create more fun and wonderful memories especially with your family and friends.

Describe a place you will never forget. Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I can\'t forget in Boracay expreience.

>> I can\'t forget my experience in Boracay.
Especially, I can\'t forget when I see under the see by scuba diving.

>> I especially cannot forget when I went scuba diving.
It was an one of the wonderful place what I see many natural view.

>> It was one of the most wonderful places that I have been to because of its natural view.
So,I want to go there again because I want to save my scuba diving\'s memory.

>> So I want to go there again because I want to keep my scuba diving diving\'s memory.

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