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2018-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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If I three wishes have life chooes only one of these to come true I choose lotto wins because we need money to experience various things. Having a lot of money is not purpose. All [이름] man want to leave but they can't reality. a babe in the woods therefore I'm trying to gain a lot of experiece and for my better future.

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Happy Monday, Ho [이름]! Thank you for once again doing your homework. I really appreciate your effort! Keep them coming! ^^

If I three wishes have life chooes only one of these to come true I choose lotto wins because we need money to experience various things.

>> If I were given three wishes and I could only choose one to come true, I would choose to win the lottery because we need money to experience various things.
 Having a lot of money is not purpose.

>> Having a lot of money is not life\'s purpose.
 All [이름] man want to leave but they can\'t reality. 

>> All [이름] men wants to leave reality but they can\'t.
 a babe in the woods therefore I\'m trying to gain a lot of experiece and for my better future.

>> I am like a babe in the woods. I\'m still in the process of trying to gain  a lot of experiences to have a better future.

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