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If I three wishes have life chooes only one of these to come true I choose lotto wins because we need money to experience various things.
>> If I were given three wishes and I could only choose one to come true, I would choose to win the lottery because we need money to experience various things.
Having a lot of money is not purpose.
>> Having a lot of money is not life\'s purpose.
All [이름] man want to leave but they can\'t reality.
>> All [이름] men wants to leave reality but they can\'t.
a babe in the woods therefore I\'m trying to gain a lot of experiece and for my better future.
>> I am like a babe in the woods. I\'m still in the process of trying to gain a lot of experiences to have a better future.
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