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For the question of topic on the world piece. I dont think so that will be a world piece in a short time. Thats why its not easy to adjust each benefit . First. Powerfull nation like a Usa want to sell the kind of weapon to each country under dispute. And.....

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QUESTION: Do you believe that there will be a world peace one day? Why or why not?

For the question of topic on the world piece.

>>For the question on the topic about world peace,

or>>This is my answer for the question on the topic about world peace.

I dont think so that will be a world piece in a short time.

>>I don’t think that there will be a world peace in a short span of time.

Thats why its not easy to adjust each benefit .

>>That’s why it’s not easy to adjust to each country’s proposed benefit.

First. Powerfull nation like a Usa want to sell the kind of weapon to each country under dispute.

>>First, powerful nations like the USA may want to sell these kinds of weapons to a country under dispute.