homework

Hello [이름]!

I really appreciate your compositions every day.

I would advise that you make simple sentences.

This will help in getting your point across more effectively and clearly.

See you in class!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think that this question is too complicate to go for one as it depends on the situation.

>> I think that this question is too complicated for me to choose just one as this depends on the situation.

When I meet someone right now, I will judge he or she`s out fit first such as face, body and behavier.

>> When I meet someone for the first time, I will judge him/her on his/her outfit,face, body and behavior.

This is natural instinct, so I think that physical attraction is very impotant to make up perfect first impression.

>> This is a natural instinct, so I think that physical attraction is very impotant to make a perfect first impression.

However, that feeling does not going too far if intelligent charm does not support physical points.

>> However, that feeling would not go too far if an intelligent charm does not support physical points.
People always expect new things from other people and physical attraction is acclimatized easily, but charm of intelligent is not limitation and can be expanded,

>> People always expect new things from other people and physical attraction can be easily changed but the charm of intelligence has no limitations and can even be expanded.

thus people who have intelly charm can give possitive expectation to others for a continously.

>> Thus, people who have internal charm can consistently give a positive impression on others.

In conclution, when it comes to short term of meeting, physicall attraction is better, but when I consider long term meeting, intelly charm is better.

>> In conclusion, when it comes to short term encounters, physical attraction is better, but when I consider long term relationships, an intelligent charm is better.