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2018-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Well, personaly, I feel more comfortable when I write English than speaking. When I speak English, my brain suddenly stop memorizing the word that I have to use. And I can\'t tell why, but I can memorize the word when I write English. But sadly, most of the word I memorize is wrong. And I\'m thinking, what kind of sentance I have to write here if I have noting to write.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

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~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, personaly, I feel more comfortable when I write English than speaking.
>> Well, personally, I feel more comfortable when I write in English than speaking.
When I speak English, my brain suddenly stop memorizing the word that I have to use.
>> When I speak English, my brain suddenly forgets the word that I have to use.
And I can\'t tell why, but I can memorize the word when I write English.
>> And I can\'t say why, but I can memorize English words easily when I write them.
But sadly, most of the word I memorize is wrong.
>> But sadly, most of the words I memorize are wrong.
And I\'m thinking, what kind of sentance I have to write here if I have noting to write.

>> And I\'m thinking, what kind of sentence do I write here when I have nothing to write.

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