Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Take it easy there, James!
You must be working so hard again.
How\'s the weather in Seoul?
Well, I\'ll get to know about it tomorrow.
Catch you then!
-Klein-
What have you accomplished this week?
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I had finished some report to the director of research center this week.
>>I had finished some report to the director of the research center this week.
But he requested several things to fix in the report.
>>Correct
My re-reporting target day is next Friday, so I am preparing my report to fix it.
>>Correct
Anyway, I reported first report to my boss this week.
>>Anyway, I reported the first one to my boss this week.
And tomorrow is Parents day but it\'s not holiday, so I visited Parent\'s house this weekend.
>>And tomorrow is Parents\' Day, but it\'s not a holiday, so I visited my parents\' house last weekend.
I promised to meet my brother that evening in my parent\'s house.
>>I promised to meet my brother that evening in my parents\' house.
We went for dinner in Korean restaurant with my parents and enjoyed our time happily.
>>We went to a Korean restaurant for dinner with my parents and enjoyed our time happily.
Anyway, this week was very busy, but I had many things what I want to do.
>>Anyway, this week was very busy, but I wanted to do many things.
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