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2018-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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What have you accomplished this week? ==> I had finished some report to the director of research center this week. But he requested several things to fix in the report. My re-reporting target day is next Friday, so I am preparing my report to fix it. Anyway, I reported first report to my boss this week. And tomorrow is Parents day but it's not holiday, so I visited Parent's house this weekend. I promised to meet my brother that evening in my parent's house. We went for dinner in Korean restaurant with my parents and enjoyed our time happily. Anyway, this week was very busy, but I had many things what I want to do.

강사 첨삭

Take it easy there, James!

You must be working so hard again.

How\'s the weather in Seoul?

Well, I\'ll get to know about it tomorrow.

Catch you then!

-Klein-

What have you accomplished this week?
 ==>
 I had finished some report to the director of research center this week.
>>I had finished some report to the director of the research center this week. 

But he requested several things to fix in the report.

>>Correct
 My re-reporting target day is next Friday, so I am preparing my report to fix it.
>>Correct

Anyway, I reported first report to my boss this week.

>>Anyway, I reported the first one to my boss this week.
 And tomorrow is Parents day but it\'s not holiday, so I visited Parent\'s house this weekend.

>>And tomorrow is Parents\' Day, but it\'s not a holiday, so I visited my parents\' house last weekend.
 I promised to meet my brother that evening in my parent\'s house.

>>I promised to meet my brother that evening in my parents\' house.
 We went for dinner in Korean restaurant with my parents and enjoyed our time happily. 

>>We went to a Korean restaurant for dinner with my parents and enjoyed our time happily.
 Anyway, this week was very busy, but I had many things what I want to do.

>>Anyway, this week was very busy, but I wanted to do many things.

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