homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Please take note of capitalization and spelling in your work.
I like what you have written here.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
when l produce language, l feel more comfortable writing it.
>> When l produce language, l feel more comfortable writing it.
some times my voice is quiet and not energitic.
>> Sometimes my voice is quiet and not energetic.
that\'s why lt is easy to converse for communication.
>> That\'s why it is not easy to communicate through conversations.
l think lt is cause me to that by reading books a lot and l like stay at home for a long time.
>> l think it is because I like reading books a lot and l like staying at home for a long time.
one of these days l can overcome do that and lt would be more comfortable for saying in english.
>> One of these days l can overcome that and it would be more comfortable for me to speak in English.
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