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2018-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

hi sharon~ see you soon ! When you produce language, are you more comfortable writing it, or saying it? Answer in 5 sentences or more. when l produce language, l feel more comfortable writing it. some times my voice is quiet and not energitic. that's why lt is easy to converse for communication. l think lt is cause me to that by reading books a lot and l like stay at home for a long time. one of these days l can overcome do that and lt would be more comfortable for saying in english.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Please take note of capitalization and spelling in your work.

I like what you have written here.

Keep practicing!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

when l produce language, l feel more comfortable writing it.

>> When l produce language, l feel more comfortable writing it.
 some times my voice is quiet and not energitic.

>>  Sometimes my voice is quiet and not energetic.
that\'s why lt is easy to converse for communication.

>> That\'s why it is not easy to communicate through conversations.
 l think lt is cause me to that by reading books a lot and l like stay at home for a long time.

>>  l think it is because I like reading books a lot and l like staying at home for a long time.
 one of these days l can overcome do that and lt would be more comfortable for saying in english.

>>  One of these days l can overcome that and it would be more comfortable for me to speak in English.

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