homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Describe a museum
How often do you visit the museum?
Which type of museum is popular in your country?
Why do you want to visit the museum?
Follow-up:
What do you think of the importance of museums in history?
How do you think of the heritage of a country?
Compare the museums nowadays and in the past
Well, I go to a museum not very often. But if something that I'm interested in shows in a museum, then I would go to see it. In Korea, there are lots of museums. And I think that a museum related with history would be the most popular in Korea. When I go to the kind of the museum, I could learn how the people who lived long time ago had lived. It gives me a pleasure of learning.
Since the museums were built up, they deliver people knowledge from history. This could be very important because we can predict our future by studying the history. I think the history should be delivered from parents to descendants. And the museums are in roles for it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jake! Good morning. I\'m so sorry for the delay. I was not able to report to work last Monday and yesterday because my grandmother died and I have to go to the province. Anyway, I am happy that you were able to answer the question properly. Please take note of the corrections and ask questions in class.
I\'ll talk to you later! ^^
T. Gracelyn
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>>I seldom go to museums.
But if something that I\'m interested in shows in a museum, then I would go to see it.
>>However, if there is something that is interesting in a museum, I visit it.
In Korea, there are lots of museums.
>>correct
And I think that a museum related with history would be the most popular in Korea.
>>And I think museums related to history are the most popular in Korea.
When I go to the kind of the museum, I could learn how the people who lived long time ago had lived.
>>When I go to that kind of museum, I can learn how the people lived a long time ago.
It gives me a pleasure of learning.
>>correct
>>It gives me the feeling of satisfaction because I was able to learn something.
Since the museums were built up, they deliver people knowledge from history.
>>Since the museums were built a long time ago, it gives people knowledge
This could be very important because we can predict our future by studying the history.
>>correct
I think the history should be delivered from parents to descendants.
>>I think history should be studied by the parents and their children.
And the museums are in roles for it.
>>And visiting museums can help them understand more about history.
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