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2018-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well, someday, people can think that I\'m not trusty. And than it will be hard to hang with the people. Than my sociability will be bad. And when I become adult, I will not be a nice person. Than I will be come a outcast...and live a lonely life.... Sorry it was a joke.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Well, it\'s good to spice things up a bit.

What better way to do that is to write about your opposite point of view.

I admire your creativity.

I\'ll talk to you in class.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well, someday, people can think that I\'m not trusty.

>> Well, someday, people may think that I\'m not trustworthy.
And than it will be hard to hang with the people.
>> And then it will be challenging to hang out with people.
Than my sociability will be bad.
>> It would be harmful to my social life.
And when I become adult, I will not be a nice person.
>> And when I become an adult, I will not be a nice person.
Than I will be come a outcast...and live a lonely life....

>> Then I will become an outcast and live a lonely life.

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