HOMEWORK

HOMEWORK: What gives you the strength to work hard each day? Please express your idea in 3 or more sentences Answer: If you work hard and spend more time than others, 1. You could make perfect result. It give you good grade on your year's evalution. 2. You will be proud of yourself. Additionally you could get recognition from the market players of your item. 3. You will have competive ablity. It means that you could survive longer than your competitors.

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ESSAY QUESTION:

 What gives you the strength to work hard each day?

 Please express your ideas in 3 or more sentences

 Answer:

If you work hard and spend more time than others,

>>If you work hard and spend more time at work than others:

or>>If you work long and hard than others:

 1. You could make perfect result.

>>You could create a perfect result.

It give you good grade on your year\'s evalution.

>>It gives you some added points on your year-end evaluation.

 2. You will be proud of yourself.

CORRECT!

or>>You are going to feel very proud of your accomplishments and yourself.

Additionally you could get recognition from the market players of your item.

>>Additionally, you could get a recognition from the top players of the market for your items.

 3. You will have competive ablity.

>>You will develop a competitive ability.

or>>You will be very competitive in your field.

 It means that you could survive longer than your competitors.

CORRECT!

or>>It will aid you with a staying power in the rat race as opposed to your competitors.