Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
You are great in your own ways, James, and I must say your parents must be so proud of you.
Thank you for sharing what you have in your heart.
I hope that you\'d continually be blessed along with your loved ones.
Happy FAMILY MONTH!
-Klein-
What is Parents\' Day for?
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As you know, Parents\' Day is for father and mother.
>>As you know, Parents\' Day is for fathers and mothers.
When I was a child, I prepared a carnation for my parents in Parents\' Day.
>>When I was a child, I prepared carnation for my parents on Parents\' Day.
And if I had enough pocket money, I bought some present for my parents.
>>Correct
When I gave the carnation and some present to my parents, they were surprised at that time and they were deeply moved.
>>Correct
Today, I received a carnation made by my daughter and I also got a thank you letter from my daughter.
>>Correct
It gives me pleasure and gives me strength.
>>Correct
In Parents\' Day, It makes me think of my parents\' effort for us.
>>On Parents\' Day, it makes me think about my parents\' effort for us.
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