Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mina! I agree with what you are saying. Nowadays, English is a widely used language. It is considered as the international language that is why most companies and tourist use English for communication. Thank you for answering your homework!.
Because English has power. It is a universal language and essential ability.
>>Because English has power. It is the universal language and it is an essential ability.
There is a lot of information in English so I have to understand English to get it. and English can be helpful in many situations such as seeing foriegn friends, getting a job, traveling and so on.
>>There are a lot of information about English, so I have to understand what English is to get it. Using English can be helpful in many situations such as, talking with foreign friends, getting a job, traveling and so on.
These are why I’m learing English.
>>These are the reasons why I\'m learning English.
I really hope to be good at English.
>>CORRECT
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