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2018-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

There is a lot of time and little conservatism. Income makes a lot of money by taking care of the family and making them an economic reward. After working as a home school teacher for more than 10 years, I have been doing group tutoring at home and spending time between family and financial compensation happily. If you ask me to choose, I will choose an electron. It\'s not all money, but the reason for living is to be happy, so the reward at least seems to satisfy me. see you in class!!!---GEMMER^^^

강사 첨삭

Hi! It\'s a nice day today! Enjoy your time Ms. [이름]! ^^ Thanks for doing your homework! See you in class!

>>> GEMMA

There is a lot of time and little conservatism.

>> CORRECT

Income makes a lot of money by taking care of the family and making them an economic reward.

>> CORRECT

After working as a home school teacher for more than 10 years, I have been doing group tutoring at home and spending time between family and financial compensation happily.

>> CORRECT

If you ask me to choose, I will choose an electron.

(what electron?)

It\'s not all money, but the reason for living is to be happy, so the reward at least seems to satisfy me.

>>It\'s not all about money, but the reason for living is to be happy, so the reward at least seems to satisfy me.

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