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2018-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Hello ! Sharon :) Today we got a good lesson. See you tomorrow ~^^ Writing Exercise: What characteristics does a bad leader have? Answer in 5 sentences or more. In my opinion, the bad leader is CEO of koreanair airway. She is currently controversial because she has acted violently and disrespectfully to her employees. So lt cause her company image getting worse and her subsidiary company may would be stoped. This damage may result in the loss of other employees jobs.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I enjoyed our class today as well.

Thank you for sending in your composition.

I\'ll call you tomorrow.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

In my opinion, the bad leader is CEO of koreanair airway.

>> In my opinion, an example of a bad leader is the CEO of Korean Air airway.
She is currently controversial because she has acted violently and disrespectfully to her employees.

>> Correct
So lt cause her company image getting worse and her subsidiary company may would be stoped.

>> So it caused a negative image of her company and even her subsidiary companies might be closed.
This damage may result in the loss of other employees jobs.

>> This damage may result in the loss of other employees\' jobs.

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