Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hurrah!
Merry May! Your plans are soooo gooood!
Please take lots of selfies and groufies, my friend.
Enjoy your time and tell me everything about it.
Keep safe!
-Klein-
What do you wish could be celebrated in the month of May?
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As you know, my wedding anniversary was in May.
>>As you know, my wedding anniversary is in May.
So I would like to be celebrated it from my children and I received a good present from my daughter.
>>So I would like it to be celebrated by my children where I received a good present from my daughter.
The present was handwritten letter.
>>The present was a handwritten letter.
The othr one is that there are many holidays in May. So I can spend much time with my children.
>>Correct
OR >> The other one is that there are many holidays in May, so I can spend much time with my children.
I wiill go to Seoul on May 18th evening with my wide and daughter and we will join with my son at night.
>>I will go to Seoul in the evening of May 18th with my wife and my daughter. We will be joined by our son at night.
We will go to the LOTTEWORLD, it is an amusement park, and we will celebrate our time together.
>>We will go to Lotte World. It is an amusement park where we will celebrate our time together.
Because of long holiday, it is possivle to celebrate our time.
>>Because of the long holiday, it is possible for us to celebrate our time.
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