Homework
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Hi there Mina! Thanks again for doing your homework. Yes, I also saw this movie before, I think the story is great too.
It is ‘Begin Again’.
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Or> It is call \"Begin Again\"
Because it made my ears happy.
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It is a kind of musical movie.
>>It is kind of a musical movie.
I like its music, also story.
>>I like its music/soundtracks and also the plot of the story.
Its movie director is John Carney.
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Or> The director of the movie is John Carney.
He is such a good movie director.
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I like his movies very much and my favorite music of the movie is ‘lost stars’.
>>I like this movies very much and my favorite sountrack of the movie is ‘Lost Stars’.
It is song by Adam Levine. He is one of the main characters in the movie and a member of maroon5.
>>It is a song sang by Adam Levine. He is one of the main characters in the movie and a member of Maroon 5.
He is a good singer and I think his song made the movie more nice.
>>He is a good singer and I think this song made the movie better.
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