homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Composition:
Describe a tourist attraction you once visited. You should say:
-When you visited it
-Where is it situated
-Who you went with
I've been to Jeju island with my family. It was 3 years ago at my mother's birthday. We traveled Jeju island for 3 days. As you know, Jeju island is one of the most beautiful attractions in Korea. We visited many attractions in the island, and I think the best attraction was Hanra mountain. We started climbing the mountain at 7 in the morning. And we could get the peak of the mountain about noon. At that time, it had been snow for days. So snow had piled up more than a meter that the mountain looked like a heaven. We took a lot of pictures and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. I won't forget the moment.
강사 첨삭
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It was 3 years ago at my mother\'s birthday.
>>It was 3 years ago on my mother\'s birthday.
We traveled Jeju island for 3 days.
>>We went around Jeju Island for 3 days.
As you know, Jeju island is one of the most beautiful attractions in Korea.
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We visited many attractions in the island, and I think the best attraction was Hanra mountain.
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We started climbing the mountain at 7 in the morning.
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And we could get the peak of the mountain about noon.
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At that time, it had been snow for days.
>>At that time, it had been snowing for days.
So snow had piled up more than a meter that the mountain looked like a heaven.
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We took a lot of pictures and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.
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I won\'t forget the moment.
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