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2018-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Well people can deal with the stress by doing things what they like to do. When I get stress, I usally read my favorite books and imagine that I'm the one of it's characters. Sometimes I really like it's imagination, I write down them and start the opening of the fanpic. Also I doodle anything on the paper when I get stress. And when I think I doodle something fine, I transfer it to the cellphone sketchbook and refine it as the fanart of what I love.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I think you are a very creative person.

Keep pursuing your talent.

I expect good things from you.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Well people can deal with the stress by doing things what they like to do.
>> People can deal with stress by doing things that they like to do.
When I get stress, I usally read my favorite books and imagine that I\'m the one of it\'s characters.
>> When I get stressed, I usually read my favorite books and imagine that I\'m one of it\'s characters. 
Sometimes I really like it\'s imagination, I write down them and start the opening of the fanpic.
>> Sometimes I really like the author\'s imagination and it encourages me to write my own fan fiction.
Also I doodle anything on the paper when I get stress.
>> I also like doodling on paper whenever I\'m stressed.
And when I think I doodle something fine, I transfer it to the cellphone sketchbook and refine it as the fanart of what I love.

>> And when I think I have doodled something nice, I transfer it to the cellphone sketchbook and refine it as fan art which I also love.

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