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2018-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Hi Sharon ! Finally Happy Friday ^^ We are going to get a nice weekend ! Writing Exercise: What are some ways to deal with stress? Answer in 5 sentences or more. I tried to go on a trip to deal with stress. I prefer to trip for abroad. Because in my country most of the places has a similar mountain and a relatively unclean beach. However, this is not bad for refreshing when l don't have time enough. Nevertheless, l like to feel better when l am another country and what l do some activities.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

You are so right!

We are going to have a great weekend!

I\'ll talk to you on Monday!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I tried to go on a trip to deal with stress.

>> I try to go on trips to deal with stress.
I prefer to trip for abroad.

>> I prefer trips abroad.
Because in my country most of the places has a similar mountain and a relatively unclean beach.

>>This is because in my country, most places have similar mountain views and relatively unclean beaches.
However, this is not bad for refreshing when l don\'t have time enough.

>> However, this is not bad to refresh myself when I don\'t have enough time.
Nevertheless, l like to feel better when l am another country and what l do some activities.

>>  Nevertheless, l like to feel better when l am in another country and when l do some activities.

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