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강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I tried to go on a trip to deal with stress.
>> I try to go on trips to deal with stress.
I prefer to trip for abroad.
>> I prefer trips abroad.
Because in my country most of the places has a similar mountain and a relatively unclean beach.
>>This is because in my country, most places have similar mountain views and relatively unclean beaches.
However, this is not bad for refreshing when l don\'t have time enough.
>> However, this is not bad to refresh myself when I don\'t have enough time.
Nevertheless, l like to feel better when l am another country and what l do some activities.
>> Nevertheless, l like to feel better when l am in another country and when l do some activities.
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