Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I hope you had a great weekend.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
It will be different by the people\'s job.
>> It will depend on a person\'s job.
If the person have the job what require the beautifulness, than the beautiful person will be more famous.
>> If a person has a job that requires beauty, then beautiful people will become really famous.
The problem is, there are the company who look a new employee\'s beautifulness even the work do not require any beautifulness.
>> The problem is, there are companies who look at a new employee\'s physical appearance even if the job does not require any form of beauty.
And the people is being lookism so the ugly person is being laughing stock.
>> People really care about others\' appearance and that\'s why ugly people become a laughingstock n society.
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