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2018-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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It will be different by the people's job. If the person have the job what require the beautifulness, than the beautiful person will be more famous. The problem is, there are the company who look a new employee's beautifulness even the work do not require any beautifulness. And the people is being lookism so the ugly person is being laughing stock. And I can't think any sentance to write here.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I hope you had a great weekend.

Tell me more in class. ^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

It will be different by the people\'s job.
>> It will depend on a person\'s job.
If the person have the job what require the beautifulness, than the beautiful person will be more famous.
>> If a person has a job that requires beauty, then beautiful people will become really famous.
The problem is, there are the company who look a new employee\'s beautifulness even the work do not require any beautifulness.
>> The problem is, there are companies who look at a new employee\'s physical appearance even if the job does not require any form of beauty.
And the people is being lookism so the ugly person is being laughing stock.

>> People really care about others\' appearance and that\'s why ugly people become a laughingstock n society.

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