HOMEWORK

Hello, Hyo Eun!

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I think talent is more important.

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Even so effort is important, too.
>>  Even so, effort is important.

>> OR: Effort is important, too.

If do not effort, need not talent.
>> You won\'t be successful if you don\'t put any effort.

talent will not succeed without any effort.
But If same effort as a talented person and a no haven talent person,

I think talented people are ahead.
>> You wouldn\'t succeed without any effort but if you compare talented people between people without any talent, talented people are ahead.

For example, athletes, singers, musician etc.
>> CORRECT
 

It\'s a hopeless story, I think it\'s certain that talent has an advantage.

>> CORRECT