HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Eunice.
Please focus on spelling and sentence pattern.
Thank you so much for your work today.
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I look after my father.
>> I take after my father.
My eyes are small, without a double eyelid.
>> My eyes are small, without double eyelids.
My father recently became white even though he is 77 years old.
>> My father\'s hair recently became white for he is 77 years old.
He didn\'t dye for a long time.
>> He didn\'t dye his hair for a long time.
My hair look after my father.
>> My hair looks like my father\'s.
My character also resemble my father.
>> My father and I also have the same personalities.
I\'m quite selfish, greedy but tender-minded to family.
>> I\'m quite selfish, greedy but soft-hearted towards my family.
I want to look after my mother because my mom always take the people in need in consideration, help them and share the things she has.
>> I want to be like my mother because my mom always takes the people in need into consideration, helps them and shares the things she has.
Sons and daughters are quite mysterious.
>> Correct
I hoped my chidren don\'t look after some of my ugly face and character.^^
>> I hope my children don\'t inherit my ugly face and character.^^
eventually my daugters resembled something bad of mine and my husband\'s
>> Eventually my daughters might resemble something bad of mine or my husband\'s.
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