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2018-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Which city in your country do you consider the most dangerous and why? Answer in 5 sentences or more. Our country is quite safe from crimes. I've never thought that one of the cities is dangerous. But sometimes whenever I watch the news that serial murders happened in some cities, I decide not to go the cities. I am quite chicken heartted person so I don't go around at night. I even don't like to ride an elevator by myself at night. I usually call my husband to come to meet me whenever I go home late at night.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi Eunice!

It\'s good that you are always careful.

We never know what could happen.

You did a good job expressing your point.

Keep it up!

~~ Teacher Sharon

Our country is quite safe from crimes.

>> Correct
 I\'ve never thought that one of the cities is dangerous.

>> Correct
 But sometimes whenever I watch the news that serial murders happened in some cities, I decide not to go the cities.

>>  But sometimes whenever I watch the news reporting about serial murders happening in some cities, I decide not to go to those cities.
 I am quite chicken heartted person so I don\'t go around at night.

>> I am quite a chicken-hearted person so I avoid going out at night.
 I even don\'t like to ride an elevator by myself at night.

>> I don\'t even like to ride the elevator by myself at night.
 I usually call my husband to come to meet me whenever I go home late at night.^^

>>  I usually call my husband to come meet me whenever I go home late at night.^^

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