homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Eunice!
It\'s good that you are always careful.
We never know what could happen.
You did a good job expressing your point.
Keep it up!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Our country is quite safe from crimes.
>> Correct
I\'ve never thought that one of the cities is dangerous.
>> Correct
But sometimes whenever I watch the news that serial murders happened in some cities, I decide not to go the cities.
>> But sometimes whenever I watch the news reporting about serial murders happening in some cities, I decide not to go to those cities.
I am quite chicken heartted person so I don\'t go around at night.
>> I am quite a chicken-hearted person so I avoid going out at night.
I even don\'t like to ride an elevator by myself at night.
>> I don\'t even like to ride the elevator by myself at night.
I usually call my husband to come to meet me whenever I go home late at night.^^
>> I usually call my husband to come meet me whenever I go home late at night.^^
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