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Um.... I like Elquines the king of spirits. But i also like another webtoon.
>> I like Elquines the king of spirits. But i also like some other webtoon title too.
Elquines\'s story is Kang Ji-hoon, a high school student who died in a traffic accident by accident,
>> Elquines\'s story is about Kang Ji-hoon, a high school student who accidentally died in a traffic accident.
finds out that he is the \"king of water that was wrongly born as a human being.
>> Then finds out that he is the \"King of water\" that was born by mistake as a human being.
\" How do you do it? \"Elquines, the spirit of water, who was born wrong as a human being!
>> \" How do you do it? \"Elquines, the spirit of water, who was mistakenly born as a human being!
Wow, that so nice of you sending a picture ^^ nice job [이름]-[이름]! :D
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