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2018-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What is your fondest (best) memory at school? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences I think my best memory was in 6 grade. It was in graduationfestival time. It was also my historic day because I graduate. So,it was my best day I go to school.

강사 첨삭

Happy hump day Seong hun!
Thank you for sharing your best memory at school. Enjoy your school days. :)
~T. Kelly
What is your fondest (best) memory at school? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
I think my best memory was in 6 grade.
>> I think my best memory was in 6th grade. 
It was in graduationfestival time.
>> It was during the graduation festival.
It was also my historic day because I graduate.
>> It was also historical for me because I graduated.
So,it was my best day I go to school.
>> So, it was my best day at school.

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