Homework-!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Tarry! Thanks for doing your homework.
I appreciate your answer and I do agree with it.
Our neighboring countries are Brunei, Indonesia, and Taiwan.
They\'re very close to our country especially Brunei.
You can take even a small boat to go to Brunei. Hahaha.. ^^
I\'ll see you later Tarry. I\'m excited to talk to you again.
~~Teacher May~~
My neighboring countries are Japan and China.
There are some similarities between us.
>> CORRECT
First, we are use Chinese character. Each countries use different languages. But a lot of words consist with Chinese character.
>> First, we use Chinese characters. Each country uses different languages, but words are written mostly in Chinese characters.
Second,we use chopsticks. When we eat food we use chopsticks, also spoon.
>> Second, we use chopsticks. When we eat food, we use chopsticks and also spoon.
There are a big differences between us.
>> There are big differences between us.
We use different languages. We all have different own languages.
>> We use different languages. We all have our own language.
Also we have different traditional clothes.
>> Also, we have different traditional clothes.
OR >> We also have different traditional clothes.
China has Chinese dress, Japan has kimono and Korea has hanbok.
>> China has traditional costume. Japan\'s traditional costume is called kimono and for Korea, it is called as hanbok.
These things are some similarities and differences between mt neighboring countries.
>> These are some similarities and differences that we have between our neighboring countries.
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