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2018-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 May

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What are some similarities and differences between your neighboring country and your country? My neighboring countries are Japan and China. There are some similarities between us. First, we are use Chinese character. Each countries use different languages. But a lot of words consist with Chinese character. Second,we use chopsticks. When we eat food we use chopsticks, also spoon. There are a big differences between us. We use different languages. We all have different own languages. Also we have different traditional clothes. China has Chinese dress, Japan has kimono and Korea has hanbok. These things are some similarities and differences between mt neighboring countries.

강사 첨삭

Hi Tarry! Thanks for doing your homework.

I appreciate your answer and I do agree with it.

Our neighboring countries are Brunei, Indonesia, and Taiwan.

They\'re very close to our country especially Brunei.

You can take even a small boat to go to Brunei. Hahaha.. ^^

I\'ll see you later Tarry. I\'m excited to talk to you again.

~~Teacher May~~

My neighboring countries are Japan and China.
There are some similarities between us.
>> CORRECT
First, we are use Chinese character. Each countries use different languages. But a lot of words consist with Chinese character.
>> First, we use Chinese characters. Each country uses different languages, but words are written mostly in Chinese characters.
Second,we use chopsticks. When we eat food we use chopsticks, also spoon.
>> Second, we use chopsticks. When we eat food, we use chopsticks and also spoon.
There are a big differences between us.

>> There are big differences between us.
We use different languages. We all have different own languages.
>> We use different languages. We all have our own language.
Also we have different traditional clothes.

>> Also, we have different traditional clothes. 

OR >> We also have different traditional clothes. 
China has Chinese dress, Japan has kimono and Korea has hanbok.
>> China has traditional costume. Japan\'s traditional costume is called kimono and for Korea, it is called as hanbok.
These things are some similarities and differences between mt neighboring countries.

>> These are some similarities and differences that we have between our neighboring countries.

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