Homework

Hi Seong Won!

The internet is indeed very useful.

I\'m glad that you are taking advantage of it in the best ways possible.

You explained your thoughts well in this composition.
Always be careful with your spelling.

~~ Teacher Sharon

I vist NAVER, NAVER WEBTOON, JOARA, NAVER CAFE, etc.
>> I visit NAVER, NAVER WEBTOON, JOARA, NAVER CAFE, etc.
NAVER is the website that people can serf the internet.

>> NAVER is the website where people can surf the net.
 I usally use it to find imformations of my interests.
>>  I usually use it to look for information about my interests.
And talking about NAVER WEBTOON, I see many webtoons that Naver pick.
>> I can actually see web toons that Naver will recommend.
JOARA is the website that any person can write stories and post them so many people can see it.
>> JOARA is a website where any person can write stories and post them so many people can see it.
NAVER CAFE... I only affiliate fan cafes so I can communicate with people who have same interests with me.

>> For NAVER CAFE, I only join fan sites so I can communicate with people who have the same interests as me.