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2018-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

How healthy is your lifestyle? ==> I think my life style is not healthy. In the morning, I wake up early for studying English. After English class, I go to the company for a work. I spend much time in the company and I come back home before dinner. Nowadays leaving time in the company is earlier than last year because we have to keep the working time 40 hours a week. So I can arrive at home before 7:00 PM. I eat dinner with my family and after that I enjoy my time freely. Sometimes I go to the gym. and exercise for my health. But I spend much time watching TV in the evening. In my mind, I know that I have to study English by myself and read books. Unfortunately I don't do that kind of thing and it makes me sad. Anyway I will try to change my evening pattern, and I hope to use evening time usefully.

강사 첨삭

Your lifestyle isn\'t all too bad, my friend.

But honestly, I like your plan better. Let\'s make it happen! Doing this homework of yours is a good part of it. Thank you for keeping up with your practice.

Take it easy there!

The weekend is just around the corner again. And oh, I saw you postponed your class on Monday already. lol

See you tomorrow!

-Klein-

How healthy is your lifestyle?
 ==>
 I think my life style is not healthy.

>>Correct (lifestyle)
 In the morning, I wake up early for studying English.

>>Correct
 After English class, I go to the company for a work.
>>After the English class, I go to the company for work. 

I spend much time in the company and I come back home before dinner.
>>Correct 

Nowadays leaving time in the company is earlier than last year because we have to keep the working time 40 hours a week.
>>Nowadays, I get off from work earlier than last year, because we have to keep the working time of 40 hours a week. 

So I can arrive at home before 7:00 PM.
>>Correct

OR >>So, I can arrive home before 7:00 PM. 

I eat dinner with my family and after that I enjoy my time freely.
>>Correct 

Sometimes I go to the gym. and exercise for my health.
>>Correct

OR >> Sometimes, I go to the gym and exercise for my health. 

But I spend much time watching TV in the evening.
>>Correct 

In my mind, I know that I have to study English by myself and read books.

>>Correct
 Unfortunately I don\'t do that kind of thing and it makes me sad.

>>Correct
 Anyway I will try to change my evening pattern, and I hope to use evening time usefully.

>>Anyway, I will try to change my evening pattern, and I hope to use my evening time wisely.

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