Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Your lifestyle isn\'t all too bad, my friend.
But honestly, I like your plan better. Let\'s make it happen! Doing this homework of yours is a good part of it. Thank you for keeping up with your practice.
Take it easy there!
The weekend is just around the corner again. And oh, I saw you postponed your class on Monday already. lol
See you tomorrow!
-Klein-
How healthy is your lifestyle?
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I think my life style is not healthy.
>>Correct (lifestyle)
In the morning, I wake up early for studying English.
>>Correct
After English class, I go to the company for a work.
>>After the English class, I go to the company for work.
I spend much time in the company and I come back home before dinner.
>>Correct
Nowadays leaving time in the company is earlier than last year because we have to keep the working time 40 hours a week.
>>Nowadays, I get off from work earlier than last year, because we have to keep the working time of 40 hours a week.
So I can arrive at home before 7:00 PM.
>>Correct
OR >>So, I can arrive home before 7:00 PM.
I eat dinner with my family and after that I enjoy my time freely.
>>Correct
Sometimes I go to the gym. and exercise for my health.
>>Correct
OR >> Sometimes, I go to the gym and exercise for my health.
But I spend much time watching TV in the evening.
>>Correct
In my mind, I know that I have to study English by myself and read books.
>>Correct
Unfortunately I don\'t do that kind of thing and it makes me sad.
>>Correct
Anyway I will try to change my evening pattern, and I hope to use evening time usefully.
>>Anyway, I will try to change my evening pattern, and I hope to use my evening time wisely.
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