homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay Writing:
Describe someone you respect deeply.
I deeply respect King Sejong, who was the king of ancient Korea. He is one of the greatest kings in our history. He did many great things, but above all, he developed Hangul. It is one of the best alphabets in the world. Since Koreans used the alphabet, Korean illiteracy rate has become almost zero. It is the lowest ratio in the world. So, many Koreans are proud of it and feel respect for him. And so do I.
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He is one of the greatest kings in our history.
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>>He is one of the greatest kings in the History.
He did many great things, but above all, he developed Hangul.
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It is one of the best alphabets in the world.
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Since Koreans used the alphabet, Korean illiteracy rate has become almost zero.
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It is the lowest ratio in the world.
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So, many Koreans are proud of it and feel respect for him.
>>So, many Koreans are proud of him and they respect him.
And so do I.
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