Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Well... I don't think that I can actually go where I write here, but I will write anyway.
First, I want to go to Harry Potter studio in England.
Then...er....I think Harry Potter studio is the only place that I want to vist.
I really, really want to go there!!!!!!!!
It is my buket list to vist there and buy many goods that are selling there.
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Of course you can go there!
You are still young.
Anything is possible.
Good luck!
~~ Teacher Sharon
First, I want to go to Harry Potter studio in England.
>> First, I want to go to the Harry Potter studio in England.
I think Harry Potter studio is the only place that I want to vist.
>> I think the Harry Potter studio is the only place that I want to visit.
I really, really want to go there!!!!!!!!
>> Correct
It is my buket list to vist there and buy many goods that are selling there.
>> It is on my bucket list to visit there and buy many goods that they are selling there.
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