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2018-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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In your point of view, when should a child start getting pocket money from his or her parents? Why? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. I get pocket money when I was 5 grade. I get 10000 won once a month. I think many children now,they get money at 3 or 4 grade. And,my pocket mony is few than other children. I want to get monney more.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I hope that you could also learn how to save from your pocket money.

Thank you for your answers.

~T. Kelly^^

In your point of view, when should a child start getting pocket money from his or her parents? Why? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I get pocket money when I was 5 grade.

>> I started getting pocket money when I was in 5th grade.
I get 10000 won once a month.

>> Correct.
I think many children now,they get money at 3 or 4 grade.

>> I think most children start getting pocket money in 3rd or 4th grade.
And,my pocket mony is few than other children.

>> And my pocket money is lesser than other children.
I want to get monney more.

>> I want to get more pocket money.

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