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2018-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Stacy

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HI Nice to see you too. i conivnced that improve speaking english skills. thanks for your time. and see you soon. Are you more productive working alone or in a group? i think that group working is efficient better than working alon. i have been experience group working many times. In case of group working improved sales revenue 35% in Sales department instead of last year but it demanded for co-working that is to be patient. So, i effort to myself for improving patient and study co-working skills. thanks

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]. Thank you for effort in making the homework. I really appreciate it. Below are some of the corrections I made. Take care and see you next week!

T.STACY

i think that group working is efficient better than working alon.

I think working in a group is more efficient compared to working alone.

i have been experience group working many times.

I have a lot of experienced working in a group.

In case of group working improved sales revenue 35% in Sales department instead of last year but it demanded for co-working that is to be patient.

Because of working as a team our sales revenue went up to 35% in our sales department last year. But it required more patience.

So, i effort to myself for improving patient and study co-working skills.

So I made an effort to improve and be more patient. I also studied some working skills.

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