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강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You described your hometown really well.
I think I want to visit there someday.
Have a great weekend!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t want my hometown(wonju) to be world famous.
>> I don\'t want my hometown, Wonju to be world famous.
And also, I don\'t think my wonju will be world famous.
>> And also, I don\'t think Wonju will be world famous.
Well, in Korea, Wonju is a little bit famous by it\'s mountains, But I don\'t think that will be enough to be world famous.
>> In Korea, Wonju is a little bit famous for its mountains but I don\'t think that will be enough to make it world famous.
Er....well, wonju is also famous by it\'s peaches and beefs.
>> Wonju is also famous for its peaches and beef.
And it is all I can think about wonju\'s famous things.
>> These are all the things I can think of that are making my hometown famous.
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