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2018-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I don't want my hometown(wonju) to be world famous. And also, I don't think my wonju will be world famous. Well, in Korea, Wonju is a little bit famous by it's mountains, But I don't think that will be enough to be world famous. Er....well, wonju is also famous by it's peaches and beefs. And it is all I can think about wonju's famous things.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

You described your hometown really well.

I think I want to visit there someday.

Have a great weekend!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t want my hometown(wonju) to be world famous.

>> I don\'t want my hometown, Wonju to be world famous.
And also, I don\'t think my wonju will be world famous.

>> And also, I don\'t think Wonju will be world famous.
Well, in Korea, Wonju is a little bit famous by it\'s mountains, But I don\'t think that will be enough to be world famous.
>> In Korea, Wonju is a little bit famous for its mountains but I don\'t think that will be enough to make it world famous.
Er....well, wonju is also famous by it\'s peaches and beefs.
>> Wonju is also famous for its peaches and beef.
And it is all I can think about wonju\'s famous things.

>> These are all the things I can think of that are making my hometown famous.

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