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I think it is better to watch sports on TV then watching it live.
>> I think it is better to watch sports on TV than to watch it live.
One reason is because it is more comfortable to watch sports in my room.
>> CORRECT
I can have snacks without noticing other people around me.
>> I can have snacks without getting bothered by other people around me.
It is quieter to watch sports on TV too.
>> CORRECT
Sometimes I want to feel the hot atmosphere when I watch sports live, but I like quiet places often times.
>> Sometimes, I want to feel the electric atmosphere when I watch sport live, but I like quiet places often times.
>> OR: More often than not, I like quiet places but there are times when I want to feel the electric atmosphere at the live games.
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