Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I agree with you MISS [이름]!
Bad news is the hardest one to deliver to other people.
Anyway, see you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
5/16 Have you ever delivered bad news to someone? What was it? If not, how do you think you should break bad news to a person?
I have delivered bad nwes to others.
>>> Correct! [news]
I don\'t realy like telling about
bad news and money to others.
>>> Correct!
When I was a teacher, I really hate telling about my students\' accident
to the parents.
>>> When I was a teacher, I really hated telling about my students\' accident to their parents.
I needed to notice them even small scars.
>>> I needed to notify them about even small scars.
I know that my students are really precious and important to their parents.
>>> Correct!
I really want to say good things to others.
>>> Correct!
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