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2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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5/16 Have you ever delivered bad news to someone? What was it? If not, how do you think you should break bad news to a person? I have delivered bad nwes to others. I don't realy like telling about bad news and money to others. When I was a teacher, I really hate telling about my students' accident to the parents. I needed to notice them even small scars. I know that my students are really precious and important to their parents. I really want to say good things to others.

강사 첨삭

I agree with you MISS [이름]!

Bad news is the hardest one to deliver to other people.

Anyway, see you tomorrow!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


5/16 Have you ever delivered bad news to someone? What was it? If not, how do you think you should break bad news to a person?

I have delivered bad nwes to others.

>>> Correct! [news]

I don\'t realy like telling about
bad news and money to others.

>>> Correct!
 When I was a teacher, I really hate telling about my students\' accident
to the parents.

>>> When I was a teacher, I really hated telling about my students\' accident to their parents.

I needed to notice them even small scars.

>>> I needed to notify them about even small scars.

I know that my students are really precious and important to their parents.

>>> Correct!
 I really want to say good things to others.

>>> Correct!

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