Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won !
I know it\'s difficult to get rid of a bad habit.
You have to do it over and over every day.
The same goes with your study of English.
It has to be done regularly for you to succeed.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Well, I tried to get rid of the bad habit like trembling my legs.
>> Well, I tried to get rid of the bad habit of shaking my legs.
But it was diffucult for me to stop getting rid of the habit.
>> But it was diffucult for me to get rid of that habit.
So I start to tremble my legs again.
>> So I started shaking my legs again.
And it was three days after I challenge to stop tremble my legs.
>> And it was only three days after I challenged myself to stop shaking my legs.
I should try to stop tremble my legs again.
>> I should try to stop shaking my legs again.
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