homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. We do not have much meaning for the birthday of Buddha.
2. I stay the same as usual.
3. I’m relax at home or play with our friends
4. There is nothing special about us who are unchristian.
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1. We do not have much meaning for the birthday of Buddha.
>> We don\'t celebrate the birthday of Buddha due to our lack of religion.
2. I stay the same as usual.
>> I don\'t do anything special on this day.
3. I’m relax at home or play with our friends
>> I just relax at home or play with my friends.
4. There is nothing special about us who are unchristian.
>> Non-Buddhists don\'t do anything special for Buddha\'s Birthday.
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