homework
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What do you think should be done to have a long life? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think it is more good because you live a lot.
Living a lot,it will be lots of experience.
I want to live a lot.
I also want to have a lot of good experience.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Enjoy life to the fullest and learn from every your every experience.
Have a good day!
~T. Kelly^^
What do you think should be done to have a long life? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think it is more good because you live a lot.
>> I think it is really good because you live longer.
Living a lot,it will be lots of experience.
>> If you live longer, you will experience a lot of things.
I want to live a lot.
>> I want to live longer.
I also want to have a lot of good experience.
>> I also want to have a lot of good experiences.
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