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Some people go to Buddha's birthday festival even if they are not a Buddhist. But most non-Buddhist go traveling or stay in home because we don't have to go to work that day. For our family, we usually go somewhere, but we stayed at home and cleaned our house today.
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Some people go to Buddha\'s birthday festival even if they are not a Buddhist.
>> CORRECT
But most non-Buddhist go traveling or stay in home because we don\'t have to go to work that day.
>> But most non-Buddhists go on a trip or stay at home because they are on a holiday that day.
For our family, we usually go somewhere, but we stayed at home and cleaned our house today.
>> CORRECT
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