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2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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I don't have experience me do to encourage myself when going through hard times. Well....maybe if me do to encourage myself when going through hard times, I trying to go traviling. Because I like traviling, and I think it's a time rest for me and a good time to recover my self-esteem. Ofcourse I will not forget to eat delicious food. :-)

강사 첨삭

Hello Ho [이름]! Wow, I hope you won\'t ever have to go through hard times. You\'re a good person, you deserve to all the happiness the world has to give. Don\'t forget to bring me with you when you go and eat delicious food, haha! Anyway, great job in doing your homework today! See you! ~Teacher Elisha

I don\'t have experience me do to encourage myself when going through hard times.

>> I have never experienced having hard times where I had to encourage myself.
 Well....maybe if me do to encourage myself when going through hard times, I trying to go traviling.

>> Maybe, if the time comes and I need to encourage myself through hard times, I will try to travel.
 Because I like traviling, and I think it\'s a time rest for me and a good time to recover my self-esteem.

>> It is because I love to travel and I think it will be a good time for me to rest and to recover my self-esteem.
 Ofcourse I will not forget to eat delicious food. :-)

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Of course, I will not forget to eat delicious food.  

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