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2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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5/7 In not more than ten sentences, write about something [material] you received that has been meaningful to you. A few days ago, I cleaned my desk drawers. There were lots of papers. I wondered what kind of papers are there. They were letters that I was recieved when I worked at kindergarten. The letters look like a garbage. That is why, I didn't know that they were letters. I checked the papers one by one. There were some Korean Alphabets and pictures that students' drew. My students were so young to write the letters so they drew and wrote the Alphabets they knew.. I couldn't throw them away. Because they are so meaningful to me.

강사 첨삭

You must be touched MISS [이름]!

Perhaps you already miss your students.

Well, at least you have some remembrance from them. ^^,

5/7 In not more than ten sentences, write about something [material] you received that has been meaningful to you.

A few days ago, I cleaned my desk drawers.

>>> Correct!
There were lots of papers. I wondered what kind of papers are there.

>>> Correct!
They were letters that I was recieved when I worked at kindergarten.

>>> They were letters that I received when I worked at the kindergarten.
The letters look like a garbage. That is why, I didn\'t know that they were letters.

>>> Correct!

I checked the papers one by one.

>>> Correct!

There were some Korean Alphabets and pictures that students\' drew.

>>> OR: There were some Korean alphabets / characters which my students\' drew.

My students were so young to write the letters so they drew and wrote the Alphabets they knew..

>>> Correct!
I couldn\'t throw them away. Because they are so meaningful to me.

>>> I couldn\'t throw them away because they are so meaningful to me.

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