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Homework : Do you like meeting new people?
Yes, I like meeting new people. We all live another life.
>> Yes, I like meeting new people because each of us is unique and has different lives.
So, I think listening story that someone has been living life is excited experience.
>> So, I think that listening to and getting to know the story of other individuals is akin to discovering or experiencing new things.
It sometimes makes me awkward, but I can\'t stop meeting new people.
>> It sometimes makes me feel awkward, but that wouldn\'t stop me from meeting new people.
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