Homework

Hello Allen.

I\'m doing fine.

I hope these corrections help you out.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon
How have you been doing?

>> Correct
I had a few big events last several days.

>>  I had a few big events for the last several days.
As you know, I enjoyed my last vacation on Thailand, then I quited my job at the last friday.

>>  As you know, I enjoyed my last vacation in Thailand, then I quit my job last Friday.
When I went out of my office, I felt complex and mixed feeling because the company is my first working place and I had worked for 7 years.

>> When I went out of my office, it was complicated and I had mixed feelings because the company was my first working place and I had worked there for 7 years. 
However I have a big enough plan to forget the event which means I must get the ielts score.

>>  However I have a big enough plan to forget the event which means I must get the target IELTS score.
To get the score, I am studying ielts english at a popular academy in Gangnam.

>>  To get the score, I am studying IELTS English in a popular academy in Gangnam.
Therefore I will restart my class but it is difficult to study with you because you might have no time to teach me ^^.

>>  Therefore I will reenroll but it is difficult to study with you because you might have no time to teach me.
 However I will try to grab your schedule, so that we can meet soon again at the class.
>>  However, I will try to fit into your schedule, so that we can meet again soon in class.
I just want to leave my recent story and wonder how you are alright.

>> I just want to tell you my recent story and ask how you were doing.
 AND I will leave my compositions to evaluate, so please help my homework ^^

>>  I will also leave my compositions for you to check, so please help me with my homework.