Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
I know you like reading books so this should be easy for you.
I really admire tat about you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I know that reading books is better than watching television.
>> Correct
The reason is, reading a book can make the person think.
>> The reason is, reading a book can make a person think.
While the person read the book, the book only show us the basic settings, so it is the person\'s mind to imagine the scean of the book.
>> When a person reads a book, the book only gives us the basic setting, so it is up to the person to imagine the exact scene.
But the television do not let us to think.
>> But the television does not let us think.
it shows all of the impormation so nobody can\'t imagine anything.
>> It shows all of the information so nobody can imagine anything.
So when people watch television, they stop thinking because there are nothing to think- they just have to look at the screen.
>> So when people watch television, they stop thinking because there is nothing to think about
they just have to look at the screen.
>> They just have to look at the screen.
And it is why that I think reading the book is better than watching the television.
>> And this is the reason why I think reading a book is better than watching television.
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