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2018-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How do you want to spend the remaining three working days this week? ==> I hope to spend last three week days very freely this week. Actually it remains two days because it's Wednesday night. I was very busy at the company and the time fast quickly. Now I am at home but I have to finish my work after this homework. There are many meetings in the company for two days. So I cannot make my time when I am in the company. I hope to talk about our way of working with my team members. As you know, I have to keep my working time 40 hours a week, so I have to focus on working when I am in the office. Although I want to spend last weekdays very freely but maybe I will spent my time very busily.

강사 첨삭

Never lose hope, James!

You got this!

Cheer up now! I will try to do the same.

Thank you for finding time for this homework although you got a lot on your plate.

Try to eat more, so you\'d have more energy.

Keep safe!

-Klein-

How do you want to spend the remaining three working days this week?
 ==>
I hope to spend last three week days very freely this week.

>>Correct
 Actually it remains two days because it\'s Wednesday night.

>>Actually, only two days remain because it\'s Wednesday night.
 I was very busy at the company and the time fast quickly.
>>I was very busy at the company and time passes quickly.

Now I am at home but I have to finish my work after this homework.

>>Correct
There are many meetings in the company for two days.
>>Correct

So I cannot make my time when I am in the company.
>>Correct 

I hope to talk about our way of working with my team members.
>>Correct 

As you know, I have to keep my working time 40 hours a week, so I have to focus on working when I am in the office.
>>Correct 

Although I want to spend last weekdays very freely but maybe I will spent my time very busily.

>>Although I want to spend the last weekdays very freely, I may spend my time very busily.

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