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2018-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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5/23 What are the main differences between you and your closest friends that cause conflicts? I think I and my best friend have different personalities because of theis, we often have an arguement. For example, I like to do something quickly when people ask me a favor but in my friend's case, she dose it by the dead line even if she isn't busy. Another one is washing dishes. I like to wash the dishes that I use right of the bat but she doesn't wash the dishes until there aren't dishes in the cupboard. I really hate this. Some people ask us how bacome friends. hehe

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I hope you\'re doing fine there MISS [이름]!

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


5/23 What are the main differences between you and your closest friends that cause conflicts?

I think I and my best friend have different personalities because of theis, we often have an arguement.

>>> I think my best friend and I  we always have an argument because we have different personalities.
 For example, I like to do something quickly when people ask me a favor but in my friend\'s case, she dose it by the dead line even if she isn\'t busy.

>>> For example, I like to do something immediately when people ask me a favor but in my friend\'s case, she does it by the deadline if she isn\'t busy.

Another one is washing dishes.

>>> Correct!

I like to wash the dishes that I use right of the bat but she doesn\'t wash the dishes until there aren\'t dishes in the cupboard.

>>> I like washing the dishes every after meal but she doesn\'t wash the dishes until there aren\'t dishes in the cupboard.

I really hate this.

>>> Correct!

Some people ask us how bacome friends. hehe

>>> Some people ask us how we became friends. Hehe!

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