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2018-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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I think taht happniness is lies within me. Because I think that people can feel the happiness even in small thing. For example, I really happy when I see my son's smile. It is not relate to money or something else. In addition, I feel fruitful when I work in current job sometime. However, I couldn't find out interest in previous company eventhoug it was more famous company in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I agree with what you said. Just like you, I believe that happiness is something we already have inside of us and it is something that money cannot buy. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic! Great job! ~Teacher Elisha

I think taht happniness is lies within me.

>> I think happiness is something that lies within me.

Because I think that people can feel the happiness even in small thing.

>> I think people can find happiness even in the smallest things.

For example, I really happy when I see my son\'s smile.

>> For example, I really feel happy whenever I see my son\'s smile.

It is not relate to money or something else.

>> It is not related to money or something else.
 In addition, I feel fruitful when I work in current job sometime.

>> In addition to that, I sometimes feel productive when I work at my current job.
 However, I couldn\'t find out interest in previous company eventhoug it was more famous company in Korea.

>> However, my previous company doesn\'t catch my interest even though it is a more famous company in Korea.

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