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< Do you like meeting new people? >
I like meeting new people!
But I am lacking in confidence. Because I am very shy at the strangers.
Sometimes I hear that I look really rude.
On acquaintance, I am kind!!
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< Do you like meeting new people? >
I like meeting new people!
>> CORRECT
But I am lacking in confidence. Because I am very shy at the strangers.
>> But I am lacking in confidence due to my shyness with strangers.
>> OR: But I lack the confidence to meet new people as I feel shy when I meet someone for the first time.
Sometimes I hear that I look really rude.
>> Sometimes, I hear that I look really rude.
>> OR: At times, I hear that I look very rude.
On acquaintance, I am kind!!
>> However, I can say that I\'m kind to acquaintances.
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